Not What I Expected

OK, here is my newest picture, I had an idea and thought I could make it come out close to what I wanted. But no matter how I tried is did not come out as I wanted. It is not a bad picture, but it does not capture the look and feel I was after. "Ten Kara Kojun" (Descending from the Heavens), there should be an accent mark over the o in Kojun but I don't know how to do that. This is 11 1/2 x 24, Acrylic, Micron marker and ProWhite on Canson board. Original and prints for sale. Picture 19.